Today we critique the webpage at Trustfm.net/ebooks/.
As usual, we’ll use the “7W formula” to evaluate the page, which you can read about here: 7W Formula
1. Who
This webpage seems to be aimed at digital product creators who are looking for a way to sell their products online.
2. What
The “what” is clear: buy the “Selling digital products with PayPal” solution.
3. Why
The “why” seems to be the ability to work from home selling digital products over the Internet. The page also lists other benefits. Assuming the target market comprises authors, photographers, musicians, etc who are NOT familiar with how to sell their wares online, the listed benefits may be sufficient. However, such benefits would not be convincing for more experienced Internet marketers.
For example, promises such as “Learn how to become No#1 digital product seller using the ‘Selling Digital Products with PayPal” method’ are, at best, difficult to believe, and the one testimonial given is rather weak.
On the whole, the copy is rather poor and probably doesn’t do the product justice.
4. How
The “how” is clear: click on the order graphic.
5. Where
The “where” is clear: there are two obvious order graphics to click on.
6. When
The “when” is now, although the video - which in its current form probably detracts from the sales message - could delay (or prevent) that.
7. Wow
What could have been the “wow” - the video - is unfortunately a major problem with this webpage.
At present the video is a rather long-winded slide show consisting of ho-hum text and an overly dramatic soundtrack. Rather than convince prospects of the merits of the product, this video may well DETER them from buying.
On the other hand, this video could be a major “wow” if it was, for example a live movie - or even a screen capture movie - of:
- how the “Selling digital products with PayPal” works;
- one or more testimonials of happy customers; or
- case studies of how the solution has worked in real life to produce incredible sales and profits for people.
To the site owner: I suggest you (1) replace the video with a video of how the solution works, testimonials, or case studies, and (2) hire a good copywriter to write better sales copy. I think you’ll see much better results from these changes alone.
Source: http://www.trustfm.net/ebooks/